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morning rain

rain drops played a song on the roof
the wind carried it away
lightening flashed a smile in the eastern sky
the trees danced with joy
the thunder clapped with excitement
my heart skipped a beat

it is morning commute time
and the morning commuters
ducked there heads
got in their cars
annoyed at this rain
which could only mean bad traffic

but if only they would use this time
to slow down and watch the show
of light and sound and water
and feel their world
being washed anew

Comments

Cheryl Cato said…
Nice post. Sort of like slow down and smell the roses, but rain & lightening are reasons to slow down, watch & enjoy.
August 12, 2010 at 7:08 PM
Deepa Jagarlapoodi said…
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August 13, 2010 at 9:43 PM
Bobkat said…
Nice :) A reminder to stop and look around us is always welcome!
August 15, 2010 at 5:48 AM
Betsy Brock said…
This is beautiful! It goes perfectly with a picture I took of my son watching the rain. Do you mind if I use it and link back to your blog? Send me a note and let me know! and...did you write it? Lovely!

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August 15, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Tillybud said…
Lovely writing and very true. I like your 'Thoughts' poem too.
August 18, 2010 at 1:28 AM
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